Ok, so recently I have been writing a story, which personally I think sounds like shit, but a friend of mine read it and another has heard parts of it and they think that it is really good and I should continue. So, I come to you asking of your opinion, please give me your honest opinion. Just keep in mind that this is just an introduction basically and is still being worked on. If you could tell me what you think much would be appreciated <3




Body, soul, and mind; all three working as one. A unity, a team; perfect harmonia. Often this is lost and with that can become many difficulties. There are many with a tale of such, each has its formalities and differences. Yet, what binds us together as an individual may or may not be seen within our own sight. Perhaps we are putting up blinders for ourselves as one might do to a cart-horse. We mask ourselves, blocking out essential facts that should and need to be taken into consideration. These things that everyone around us notice and yet, we don’t see it our self. The most important one who needs to know, who needs to accept it, ignored these hints, these vital clues. Maybe it’s not that these signs are ignored, but rather transparent. So transparent that the one seeking them out cannot find them. They are so close and yet so far. Even with it right in front of your face, it is hard to notice because of how little room you have to spot it. How does one go about this matter? How are you supposed to be able to find it? That, cannot be answered, for everyone is different and therefore the way to go about this isn’t always the same.

People have dealt with things as such for many years. Way back when the world was a different place. When things that exist today weren’t even though about. A time before this, a time when you had to do so much to just live. A fight for survival, that’s what it was. Day in and day out, just barely able to get by. When work meant a whole different thing; work to survive, don’t work and die; life or death. That was the choice, you work or you die. Today if you don’t work then you should be able to get by somehow, someway. Before, work was all you could do. If you chose not to work, where would you get food, how would you support your family? It was a mans job to take care of the family and such harsh labors were thrown upon his shoulders. So difficult, so harsh; it’s a surprise that they were able to cope with such a task. Everything was up to him to do; well, except for things like cooking and clearing, that was the job of his wife. Also, that came with taking care of the children, but none of these were of such back-breaking labor as those done by men. Man equaled power; that was the belief of many. Some, this applied more to than others and then some could really care less about it. The opinion of everyone was pretty much split into two parts. For or against; those were the choices.